Thursday, October 11, 2012

Dad (32-38)

Dear visitors,
When we last left off Peak was at the airport waiting. Peak got tired of waiting and he was starting to worry if his dad was going to come or not.  He was thinking to him self is his dad going to come and  what kind of important was he running. He decided to go to the airport counter to see if his flight was on time it read "ONE TIME" and right when he got to the counter  he glanced at the television the television spoke. " The state of New York had reached a plea agreement with Peak Marcello the boy who climbed the Woolworth building early last week. He was sentenced to three years of probation and was fined a whopping  one hundred and fifty thousand dollars! This is steepest penalty ever giving for a criminal trespass in New York history..."

 In my opinion if I were Peak I would get really mad  because since he was not the only person that had climbed the building or the only criminal fined for doing something illegal. I personalty think that his fine should of been mus less than that it is not Peaks  fault that the boy climbed the building and died. I really wonder what happened to Peak's dad.

2 comments:

  1. Nice work using quotes from the story! I love it. Now you just need to be super careful about the spelling and things when you are quoting the book.

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  2. Dear Bernadette,
    Great writing! I like the quote from the text that you put in this quote: " The state of New York had reached a plea agreement with Peak Marcello the boy who climbed the Woolworth building early last week. He was sentenced to three years of probation and was fined a whopping one hundred and fifty thousand dollars! This is steepest penalty ever giving for a criminal trespass in New York history..."

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